THE CHANGES IN CLOTHING AND STYLE
The clothing and style
of people are changing day by day. In this changing, periods and movements play
an important role. When we look the recent past, many currents and their
effects can be seen clearly. Therefore, in term of these movements period,
clothing and style can be viewed in three different times and these are the
1970s, 1980s, and 1990s.
First,
we can see the current and their effects on people’s clothing and style in the
1970s. Toward the end of the 1960s, the young started a movement against the
system, consumption and people who were called hippies were revealed. They were
the children of love and freedom. They had a motto and it was “Make love not
war.” In addition to this, the youth of this movement created their own unique
style of dressing. Colourful clothes, large floral patterns were the main
clothing. As well as long skirts, boots, and dresses were widely used.
Second,
we can see the movement and their effects on people’s clothing and style in the
1980s. In the 80s, women began to work in managerial positions in business. In
order to appear stronger than they were, they started to choose more masculine
clothes. To show shoulders broad, they preferred to big shoulder pads and short
hair. On the other hand, youth were in another world. Due to the Disco Era,
young people started to wear clothes in bright, fluorescent colours. They tried
to emulate Madonna and Michael Jackson.
Finally,
we can see the differences and their effects on people’s clothing in 1990s. In
these years, anew trend which was called “Grunge” started to spread. Young
people gave up on brightly coloured clothes and began to wear relax and shabby
clothes. The clothes which they wore were military boots, sweaters, plaid
shirts, and ample jeans. Additionally, there were also changes in women’s
clothing. Most of them began to appear more feminine. As a result of their
self-esteem, there was an increase in formfitting clothes.
In
conclusion, the periods and movements have an important role on people’s
clothing and style. When we look the periods, we can easily see the changes in
clothing. In my opinion, these changes will continue throughout the history of
mankind. Maybe, one day, people begin to wear dresses in a very different style
from our period and they might see us as strange people.
OUTLINE
Thesis Statement: Therefore, in term of these
movements period, clothing and style can be viewed in three different times and
these are the 1970s, 1980s, and 1990s.
1. The
1970s
a. Hippies
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The children of love and freedom
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Their motto
b. Their
own style of dressing
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Colourful clothes
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Skirts, boots, dresses
2. The
1980s
a. Women
began to work in managerial positions.
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The more masculine clothes
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Shoulder pads, short hair
b. The
young
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Disco Era
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Madonna and M. Jackson
3. The
1990s
a. Grunge
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Relax and shabby clothes
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Military boots, sweaters, plaid shirts,
ample jeans
b. The
changes in women’s clothing
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To appear more feminine
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Formfitting clothes
Conclusion
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YanıtlaSil1-) Therefore, in term ( something is missing here) of these movements period, ... (paragraph 1, line 4)
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