FREE EDUCATION
OKAN ŞAHİN
02. 05. 2014
The
opinion that college or university education should be tuition free
for-all-policy is very controversial. Some people think that it is beneficial
for their country, some people don’t. Even though making all schools free can
be very expensive for state economy, I think its advantages are valuable. And
there are several reasons why university education should be free for everyone.
First,
the most powerful reason of free education is equality of opportunity. Because
there are many families who can’t pay for the education of their children,
young people from poor families can’t continue their education. This is a
barrier for many intelligent young. Therefore, it must be the duty of
government to make education accessible to everyone. Talented youth are an
important asset of a nation. In addition to that, they can help to develop the
economy of a country and make it prosper.
Second,
another advantage of making education free is happiness. Nowadays we can see
the students who do different jobs to earn money. This limits their leisure
time and they can’t spend time with their friends. After a while, this causes
students to live stressful life. However, they continue their education easily and
can focus on their lectures if the education is free. Finally, they live their
lives and are happy.
Finally,
the free education means the more educated people. When the rate of educated
people increases, societies develop. And higher education leads to productive
workforce. As a result of this, countries have higher level of innovation and
productivity growth. On the other hand, the educated people have more chance to
find well-paid jobs. Then, they pay a lot of money to the government as a tax.
In short, making education free adds a lot of things to community.
In
conclusion, there are many arguments about making education free. Although it
can be very expensive for state economy, its advantages help to develop
country. Thanks to free education, many children who are from poor families can
reach their goals. To sum up, making university education free gives people
equal opportunities and this is important for society.
1)And there are several reasons why university education should be free for everyone.=> Your thesis steatment is not clear enough.You should write reasons you meant in your thesis steatment.
YanıtlaSil2)this causes students to live * stressful life.=> Prep.
3)Finally, they live their lives and are happy.=> Rewrite this sentence.There is something wrong.
You can say '...they live happily in their lives.'
1)Talented youth are an important asset of a nation : Subject verb agreement. (1. body prag).
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3)And higher education leads to * productive workforce: missing article.(3. body parag).
1) Therefore, it must be the (change article) duty of government to make education accessible to everyone.
YanıtlaSil2) Finally, the free education means the(delete) more educated people.