First Draft 2- THE DIFFERENCES IN WOMAN LIFE

                                                                            

                     THE DIFFERENCES IN WOMAN LIFE

    Like many other countries, Turkey is in the midst of major social change. This social change affected people’s outlook on life. And it caused generational differences. When we compare, it is obvious to see that women in today’s world are different than women in our grandmothers’ time in Turkey in terms of fig, education and social status.

    

     First, we can see the difference easily between our grandmothers’ time and today in woman clothing. Anciently, clothing was shaped according to the needs. Therefore, when a woman bought a dress, they chose what they can use more. In addition to that, they cared to spend as little money as possible they had because economic opportunities weren’t as good as now. On the other hand, clothing is shaped according to pleasures in today’s world. Women are always buying whatever they want and trying to wear trendy clothes. Moreover, some of them can spend large amounts of their money to wear just an outfit for a day.

     Second, we can see how much changed education system and female education rates. 30 years ago, Turkey was very bad situation when we compared to now. Thus, not only women but also men had difficulty in getting education. As well as, most families didn’t want to send their girls to school due to the social conditions of the period. However with the development of Turkey, positive changes have occurred in women’s education. There isn’t any girl who doesn’t go to school. In this situation, compulsory education has an important role. According to compulsory education system, everyone have to study to high school.

     Finally, we can see the changes in women’s social status. In our grandmothers’ time, perspective on women didn’t allow them to take place in working life. Cooking, raising children, cleaning were things that were expected from them. People behaved as if women couldn’t do important jobs. Today, point of view on women changed. They began working in managerial position. After that, social perception has changed and women started to see more respect.

      
     In conclusion, we can see the differences between our grandmothers’ time and today in terms of clothing, education and social status. I think all these changes were necessary and in a positive direction. And it must continue to do. We should behave women in a positive way because they are very important factor in the development of a country.

                             

                                

                         

                                 OUTLINE

 Thesis S.: When we compare, it is obvious to see that women in today’s world are different than women in our grandmothers’ time in Turkey in terms of fig, education and social status.

           1.    Differences between our grandmothers’ time and today in woman clothing.

             a.     Needs

          - Women chose what they can use more.

          - They cared to spend as little money as possible.

        b. Clothing according to pleasures.

          - Women buy whatever they want.

          - Large amount money for one dress

      2. Female education rate

         a. Old situation

          - Difficulty in education

          - Families didn’t want to send them to school.

         b. Positive changes

          - Girls go to school

          - Compulsory education

          - What is compulsory education?

       3. Changes in social status

         a. Perspective on women

           - House works

           - People’s belief

          b. Point of view on women changed

            - Managerial position jobs

            - More respect

        Conclusion