OUTLINE
Thesis S. : The major changes have been seen in marital
life from our grandparents’ time to our time and these are the time of marriage,
the choice of partner, divorce.
1.
The
age of marriage
A.
Farming
and manpower-intensive occupations
-People make money at an early ages
B. People
must complete their education
- They get old
2. The choice of partner
A. Choosing a marriage partner was a
family matter
- Cradle arrangements
- Unhappy life
B. Choosing a marriage partner is an
individual matter
- Spending time together
- Selecting the appropriate
person
3. Divorce
A. The divorce rate was less
-Problem
B. Increasing in divorce
- The significance of marriage
- A normal event
THE CHANGES IN MARRIAGE
Like many other
countries, Turkey is in the midst of major social change. This social change
has affected people’s outlook on life and marital life. It also led to the cultural
change and generational differences. Later, the major changes have been seen in
marriages from our grandparents’ time to our time; these the time of marriage,
partner selection, divorce rates.
First, the time of marriage changed. People
were starting to work at early ages and there was farming, manpower-intensive
occupations in our grandparents’ time. They were making money at early ages and
their families were forcing their children to marry. However, in ourtime,
people must complete their education to make money. Therefore, they are old
when they marry.
Second, there is a difference in partner
selection. Choosing a marriage partner was a family matter in our grandparents’
time. Because of cradle arrangements, their partner was known. Thus, it led to
unhappy marriages. But, in our time, choosing a marriage partner is an
individual matter. Finally, they select the appropriate person to marry.
Finally, the
divorce rates are different. In our grandparents’ time, the divorce rate was
less. Because families decided to partner who they married, divorce was a big
problem. On the other hand, there is an increase in the divorce rates in our
time. Due to the social change, the significance of the marriage decreased.
After that, the divorce was seen as a normal event.
In conclusion, there are lots of differences
between our grandparents’ time and our time. They cause many changes in marital
life andwe can see the changes easily when we compare marriage in our
grandparents’ time and marriage in our time. In my opinion, these changes will
continue throughout the history of mankind. After that, we will see the
differences between us and our grandchildren in the near future.
(→)Finally, the divorce rates are different.
YanıtlaSilthey are(ww) old when they marry.
Due to the social change, the significance of the marriage decreased. After that, the divorce was seen as a normal event. (Revise the tense you use)
and(#)we
midst(ww)
YanıtlaSilTurkey is in the midst of major social change.(revise this sentence)
cultural change(singular,plural)
to our time; these(punctuation)
They were making money (ww)
andwe(space)
to make money. (ww)